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post #1 of 8
2/16/06 at 6:16pm
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I have released the first three chapters of a book I'm writing called "PROFILE."
It's on MySpace in the blog spot of my page. I'm about half way through writing it but just have the first three chapters polished. If you'd like take a look and tell me what you think.

http://www.myspace.com/durden500
http://blog.myspace.com/durden500
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post #2 of 8
2/16/06 at 7:07pm
cool. ill check it out. i added you yesterday. ah actually you didnt accept my request. bastard....
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post #3 of 8
2/16/06 at 7:10pm
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I didn't know it was you?? Fizz send me again and I'll add you. Sorry..
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post #4 of 8
2/16/06 at 8:00pm
Read the three chapters. If you're going to publish, you will need an editor. However, aside from the technical stuff, I enjoyed your writing. Chapter 2 was my favorite although you've got some pretty good "phrase turns" in all 3 chapters. You're doing good - keep writing. Isn't Stephen King in your neck of the woods?
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post #5 of 8
2/16/06 at 8:04pm
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Originally Posted by spaced
Read the three chapters. If you're going to publish, you will need an editor. However, aside from the technical stuff, I enjoyed your writing. Chapter 2 was my favorite although you've got some pretty good "phrase turns" in all 3 chapters. You're doing good - keep writing. Isn't Stephen King in your neck of the woods?
Well, he lives in Bangor Maine. That's still a few hours away from Derry NH.
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post #6 of 8
2/16/06 at 8:20pm
cool book! I am looking forward to it's release
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post #7 of 8
2/17/06 at 1:15pm
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Originally Posted by durden500
I have released the first three chapters of a book I'm writing called "PROFILE."
It's on MySpace in the blog spot of my page. I'm about half way through writing it but just have the first three chapters polished. If you'd like take a look and tell me what you think.

http://www.myspace.com/durden500
http://blog.myspace.com/durden500


I read the first three chapters, and I will honestly say it was interesting reading...very good, and I will continue to read so please let us know when you post more chapters....
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post #8 of 8
2/17/06 at 1:17pm
re-added you and slowly reading your book...very good so far.
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